Rosy-hued curls, arranged in whirls,
remind me of a clock, stopped.
The minute hand is stuck at twelve.
The hour hand spins too fast to see.
Time has come and gone,
fled when I wasn’t looking.
Now Columbine blooms while
the red queen dances in between.
Alice-tall, Alice-small,
I don’t see Alice at all.
The cheshire cat is grinning
even as my head is spinning
like the hour hand unseen.
Time is measured by kids’ height,
and mine are grown like Alice,
ten feet tall added one and all.
Do I add them head to head or
foot to foot? Or do I let them grow
without any measurement at all?
If time were in these fleeting blooms,
it would always come round again,
we just can’t be sure exactly when.
Copyright 2016 Brenda Davis Harsham
Note: I’ve been ill and reading too much poetry. When I woke this morning, the whole world was spinning. My words are spinning, too, it seems. Here’s a song that makes me enjoy the sensation, even as time seems to spin backwards:
They do look a bit like clocks, such pretty pink flowers too!! 🙂 I love the ‘Alice’ dream-like/time feel to this whole poem, very good and absolutely timely! I hope you’re feeling better now…not too much spinning I hope?
I’m thrilled you shared the original music, I had no idea that was an old song, never heard it before. And there was me thinking they wrote it for Pink to sing in the movie! 😀
I shall be turning into a kid again on Thursday when I go to see the new Alice movie…love Johnny Depp’s Mad Hatter…can’t wait!! Have you seen it yet?
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I haven’t seen it! What am I waiting for?
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I still haven’t seen it either, trip to cinema got cancelled due to a stupid emergency electric generator a neighbour had running all night, some kind of emergency electrical work going on. It was like a truck outside my bedroom window, plus it was a horrible humid night, never got a seconds sleep, was in no mood to see a movie the next day! The plan is now for Wednesday, so I get to be all excited again! 😉
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I looked for it, but it’s only at a few drive ins. I haven’t been to a drive in since I was a kid, but I don’t want to sit in my car that much. I’ll wait for netflix at this point. Sigh.
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Finally got to see it. It was a great movie! Involves a time machine, so a little bit H G Wells/Doctor Who (they added that into the story) I enjoyed it. I’m sure your children will love it Brenda…and maybe you too! 🙂
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I liked this poem with homage to Alice, elements of Wonderland. I also felt that my children would be lovely to keep young at all times, but once their children appeared, I changed my mind and love each as they are!
Brenda, my girls who have liked J. Depp since young say his French partner and co-parent of children says he never would hit a woman. Since she has nothing to gain (as Amber Heard may have) she seems to be a credible witness to Depp’s behavior. I will keep hoping.
My DIL, Skyler, Lara, Landen, Marley, Kyah and baby Hendrix and I went to see this second film. 🙂 On our walk home, others heading off with DIL, 11 year old Sky said this was a “lighter movie” and “happier ending than the first one.” I like Tim Burton but he may put a darker slant on his directing. (?) Skyler noticed the Cheshire Cat wasn’t as “scary.” 🙂
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I look forward to seeing the second film one day. It’s a wonderful story. Thanks for your comment!
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FIREWORK EXPLOSIONS OF RED AND WHITE! THANK YOU ALSO FOR “THE RABBIT”.
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Hop hop.
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I’ve had Wonderland on the brain this week – so I smiled when I saw this! Lovely poem. And a little music never hurts!
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How can we not have Wonderland on the brain with what’s going on with Johnny Depp? Surely his release of Through the Looking Glass and his divorce from Amber Heard are impossible to avoid. Do you think they timed the divorce to bring the movie into the spotlight? 😉
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I hope not given some of the coverage and allegations! Sigh.
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I have trouble believing it of J Depp, but I hate to side against a sister. It’s a tangle.
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Very nice.
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Thanks.
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I hope you took the right pill 🙂
Love that song.
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LOL No pills for me.
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Your poems always delight. 😃
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Thanks, Imelda. Now that is something to live up to. Hmmm. LOL
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I hope you feel better soon! 😚
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Thanks!
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i hope you are feeling better soon, and i have to say, what an amazing whirling poem came from this, you are magic.
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Aw, Beth, what a nice thing to read, as I lay here trying to cope with the whirling of a new day. Now my back is protesting all the tipsy-turvy wayward staggering. Ugh. Back pain.
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Get well, soon
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Thanks. I appreciate that.
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Wonderful. You capture both the feeling of being dizzy and the dizziness that comes when we see our children suddenly growing upwards and beginning to leave childhood behind.
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You really see it best on other people’s kids after a lull of seeing them. And it hits you, BAM, time is gone.
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This is very true indeed. Unbelievably my oldest grandson in 21 this week. I rarely see him because he lives interstate and now suddenly he is grown up.
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OMG Congrats!
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Wonderfully penned… 🙂
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Thanks, Maniparna!
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A very clever poem, Brenda!
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Thanks, Cynthia.
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your blog is STUNNING, you know
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Thanks, Melanie!
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