Dark falls swiftly,
My neighbor’s windows glow,
Turning the last winter snow pink
And the evening friendly.
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Note: Thanks to Blog it or Lose it for introducing me to the naani. The naani, a popular form of poetry in India, has four lines with 20-25 syllables total. Any subject is embraced, often relationships or current events.
References:
http://www.poetrydances.com/naani.php
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/naani.html
http://www.examiner.com/article/naani-an-easy-poetry-form
http://popularpoetryforms.blogspot.com/2013/02/naani.html
http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/8009
32 thoughts on “Light in the Dark Naani”
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Friendly Fairy Tales 
Ah, pink snow, how delightful! I’ve seen that a couple of times in my life, but a rare even where I am! 🙂
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Yes, it was a rare moment, perhaps not to be seen again for a long time. 🙂 Thanks for recognizing that. 🙂
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Very nice.
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Thanks!
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How wonderful.. the friendliness of the neighbour’s lights.. naani.. have to remember that.
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Thanks! :-)The man who lives there is Italian, speaks with a fabulous accent, and is very friendly. In 10 years, I have never met his wife. It’s odd, but there it is.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS NAANI HAS A GOOD FLAVOR TO IT!!!!!
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thanks for sharing this form. a cheerful poem as the day ends
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Thanks, I like this new form, too. And it was a cheery moment. 🙂
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Lovely 🙂
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Thanks!!
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Brenda, this is quite pretty. Take care, Bill
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Thanks, Bill. It was a peaceful night. 🙂 Cheers, Brenda
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Coolio. I like the new type of poem style. And the capture was awesome.
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Thanks, I liked the pink snow and yellow glow. 🙂
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So sweet
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Thanks!
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love the pink and the return of the friendly. also enjoyed the form, i’ve never heard of this before –
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I wonder if my neighbor will ever see this. LOL I doubt it. Perhaps you should write a naani. 🙂
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Lovely, Brenda. Arigato.
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Thanks, Mike. I like this new form (new to me). 🙂
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Oh, I like such pink friendly evenings! 🙂
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Me, too. The snow can be beautiful. I am so lucky to be free to walk outside and see it. I was very moved by Belinda’s walk to her mailbox. So much we take for granted in life, but it’s so precious when we see it through another’s eyes.
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I like that Brenda, seeing something precious through another’s eyes! That is a little golden gem! 🙂
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I am listening now to the music accompanying your night sky, and it is stunning. Startling and beautiful, like the songs of birds. Silence and magic entwining. No wonder your picture turned out so beautiful. I love it!
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Oh, yes I love him! He is a Norwegian Jazz musician called Jan Garbarek. He is very popular in Norway. My father loves his music, so I grew up listening to it 🙂
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Wonderful. My parents liked Country & Western, American Southern music. And every once in a while my dad would slip in a classical song. 🙂
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Oh, Classical! My big brother loves classical! That makes me think of the music to the Nutcracker Ballet! I want to listen to that now! It is magical!
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Yes, Tchaikovsky is awesome!
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كلام رائع كيف الحال
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شكرا لك!
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