we crash, crowd and compete
but within our community,
we find our best selves
Copyright 2018 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: I had a great critique group meeting yesterday. I am in awe of their mad skills and generosity. I was part of something larger than me: an ocean of words, a sea of stories. I’m not sure if I was a seal or a seagull, but I’m afloat.
Happy Poetry Friday! Thanks to Carol at BeyondLiteracyLink for hosting. Has anyone seen the community poem created by Morning Edition listeners and Kwame Alexander? Although holiday-themed, it inspired me to offer to organize a community poem. Anyone interested? If so keep reading…
Please leave a line (or two) about what poetry is or what it means to you (either quote or original with attribution). Once I have enough, I’ll post them on a future Poetry Friday, with an invitation to write your own poem from them. I’ll get us started:
Poetry Is…
… ice cream on a summer day. (Brenda Harsham)
… deep thoughts wrapped in golden words. (Deb Whittam)
… the flutter of words at sunrise. (Jone Rush MacCulloch)
… a quest. La poésie est une quête. (Prunelles9)
… a ripple on still water. (Beth)
… the music of words, our first language. (Laura Shovan)
… truth waiting to be found. (Michelle Kogan)
… a way of walking in the world. A ministry of presence. A stormcloud about to burst. (Irene Latham invites us to pick one)
… the roots; sending fingers of truth deep into the earth, and sprouting hope. (Kathryn Apel)
… the beauty and honesty of the unspoken. (Matt Forrest Esenwine)
… the quiet heartbeat of life. (Kay McGriff)
… the air that lives in our souls…the rhythm of our existence. (Kennie Vevah)
… the essence of reality and the reality of essence. (Donna Smith)
… an umbrella on a rainy day. (Jane Whittingham)
… my breathing space, my heart’s song, my soul’s prayer. (Myra Garces-Bacsal)
… more questions than answers. (Mary Lee Hahn)
… the gentle wonderings of a world calling me to unravel its beauty in words. (Carol Varsalona)
… seeing myself in the mirror of another’s eyes. (Michelle H. Barnes)
… my imaginings made real. (Linda Mitchell)
… eliminating the unnecessary. (Diane Mayr)
… the joyful heartbeat of words to share. (Kiesha Shepard)
… a bell and its echo all at once. (Robyn Hood Black)
… a cup of tea with a friend you will never meet, a connection across time, words that outlive our lives. (Ali Grimshaw)
… a cure to the wounds of life. (anondotverse)
… a gift. (OneHundred&OnePursuits)
… what prose can’t be. It’s a photograph rather than the whole film. (Bliss Winters)
… the gentle click that pulls it all into focus. (Molly Hogan)
… the words that tremble from my mouth but stand strong at the end of my pen. Poetry is strength! (BigDJean)
… the essence of my complex simplicity. (Ashley Yeager)
… a basket we weave with words to store the world. (Brenda Davis Harsham)
… the very beating of the heart. (theBookishNook)
And quotes:
Charles Simic says: “Poems are other people’s snapshots in which we see our own lives.” (Diane Mayr)
Poetry is… the essence of my complex simplicity
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Great, thanks! It will go in my next post tomorrow at noon. I’ll attribute to Ashley Yeager then, ok?
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Awesome im glad you liked it
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Poetry is.. the words that tremble from my mouth but stand strong at the end of my pen
Poetry is strength!:)
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That’s beautiful. I’ll add it to the next post, the invitation. Shall I attribute to BigDJean?
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Yes please! (Not quite sure what that means but I’ll learn!)
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In the original Poetry Is… An Invitation, I not only invited people to leave their take on it, but also said I would collect the lines and publish them with an invitation to use them to write a poem from the words. So we will have a collected community poem, and we can use the full poem to “find” other poems within it. You know about found poetry? I am already working on the new post, Poetry Is… A Revelation, which will go up on February 8. I am too lazy to update the old post and the new post. So your addition have gone into the new draft and will be part of the February 8 post. Congrats. Many of the poets included have many books of poetry making the world a more beautiful place. If you visit the poetry friday link-up, you can follow the links, visit and get to know them. We are a kidslit crowd primarily, but lots of good poetry is all around us. You are always welcome at friendlyfairytales as well. Your site is full of beauty and strength. I’m glad we met.
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Wow that is amazing! So inspiring I look forward to seeing the post and reading the previously posted ones. I’m glad we met too! Cheers to successful blogging.
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Yes, cheers! Cheers to enjoying who we are.
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Hey! I’m new to WordPress and just trying to find my way around. I just posted some poetry and I am inspired by your blog! Thank you for sharing your talent 🙂
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This is great! You should submit to the inaugural issue of Winter Wheat! Check us out at http://winterwheat.press/
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I’m afraid I don’t have time to get all the contributors to agree to that. But thanks!
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This is beautiful!!!! Thank you
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We have a great community of poets and writers in WordPress. Thanks for stopping by.
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Poetry is…the gentle click that pulls it all into focus
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Thanks, I’ll add you to the draft for next week. Attribute to Molly Hogan?
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Sure 🙂 What a great idea this is!
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Glad it’s collecting so many good metaphors.
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poetry is what prose can’t be. It’s a photograph rather than the whole film.
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Nice one, thanks for joining in.
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Poetry is a gift
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Thanks. Should I attribute it to OneHundred&OnePursuits?
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Yes please 🙂
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Poetry is..a cure to the wounds of life.
Such lovely entries, almost had me charmed. A wonderful post, indeed. 🙂
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I’ll add yours. Do you want me to attribute it to anondotverse?
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Would be honoured. 🙂
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Nah, don’t add my little comment. Just consider it some Monday encouragement.
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Thanks, Katalina. You’d be welcome to join in, if you want, with your own Poetry Is, if one pops into your head. 🙂
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Hi! I’m an aspiring writer and followed you because I like your posts. Please check out my blog as well, I’m new to wordpress. https://savagestyledotblog.wordpress.com/
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Nice!
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Sometimes, poetry is finding a lovely collection of poetry on a nice blog like this one. Cheers!
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LOL Thanks! Not sure if you want me to add that one to the list. But thanks for your words!
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This collection is wonderful! What a fun idea!
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Thanks, Keri. It was an impulse that has grown beyond my expectations. What a wonderful community we have. 🙂
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Poetry is a cup of tea with a friend you will never meet, a connection across time, words that outlive our lives.
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Those are beautiful. Thanks!
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What a lovely group project!
Poetry is…the mystery of having been fed by breath and heartbeats.
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a bell and its echo all at once.
Thanks, Brenda! :0)
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Another great one. Thanks, Robyn!
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Love this invitation, Brenda! …the joyful heartbeat of words to share.
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That’s lovely. 🙂
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I think everyone’s said all that needs to be said. The only thing I have to offer comes from being a haiku writer: poetry is eliminating the unnecessary.
Here’s one of my favorite quotes about poetry, by Charles Simic: “Poems are other people’s snapshots in which we see our own lives.”
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Those are both wonderful.
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Ack! I’m late to the party. Usually, I read your blog early in PF. What happened to me? Anyway, I love this and have really enjoyed reading the contributions. Thank you for inviting all of us today. I am responding with…
Poetry is my imaginings made real.
Hugs and high-fives for your post this week.
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High Five, Poet-friend! Thanks for your gift of words.
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Not surprisingly, your poem at the top of this post speaks to me, Brenda. I’m excited about watching this community poem and future challenge unfold. Lots of beautiful sentiments here. For me, poetry is seeing myself in the mirror of another’s eyes.
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I’m glad you like the poem and invitation. The lines gifted are beautiful.
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Poetry is the gentle wonderings of a world calling me to unravel its beauty in words. What a great idea to create a community poem, Brenda.
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Lovely, Carol. I’m so glad you’re joining.
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Ah, yes, community is everything!
And poetry? Poetry is…more questions than answers.
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Maybe questions are answers. 😉 Great addition, Mary Lee. I think there will be more definitions that there are poets. 🙂
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Great collection of poetry is statements. The wide-range of thoughts show that is it much more than a mere piece of writing.
Being that my place doesn’t feature poems, that you may be interested in a challenge that I just announced because poems fit. Feel free to invite other poets. https://afrankangle.wordpress.com/if-challenge/
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Thanks, Frank! I don’t know if I can find time or not. Just now, off to be chauffeur mom.
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No problem … At least 10 days away.
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Poetry is my breathing space, my heart’s song, my soul’s prayer. 🙂
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Poetry is an umbrella on a rainy day. I’ve been having a rough few months, and poetry has kept my soul afloat, and provided some shelter from the storm.
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I’m sorry you’re having a rough time. Poetry buoys me, too.
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Sounds like fun in store…
Poetry is the essence of reality and the reality of essence.
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Nice circle we’re forming.
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Poetry, the air that lives in our souls…the rhythm of our existence.
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Great! I’ll attribute to Kennie Vevah. That okay?
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Awwwn…. Thank you… Bless your kind heart.
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from me….Poetry is the quiet heartbeat of life.
And one of my favorite poems is Charles Bukowski’s “Defining the Magic” where every line starts with “A good poem…” My favorites include “A good poem is a gun when the mob corners you”
“a good poem can frame agony and hand it on the wall”
There’s much more, too!
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I love that poem, too. He was brilliant.
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Excellent! 😎🥀
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Thanks, Dorna. People are throwing great lines my way.
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No doubt, and it shows! 😎🥀
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Poetry is…the beauty and honesty of the unspoken.
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Beautiful one.
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So much zest in this post, Brenda! And huzzah for all the exciting stuff happening in your writing world! (Comment to Molly.)
Poetry is the roots; sending fingers of truth deep into the earth, and sprouting hope.
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I like that. I’m happy to add your line. Welcome to the party.
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Love this concept, Brenda…and the poem and the accompanying photo are wonderful. Great post.
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Thanks, Jet.
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Love . . . wonderful!!! Here’s to always striving to find our best selves.
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Thanks, Jama!
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Poetry is… a way of walking in the world. A ministry of presence. A stormcloud about to burst. (Pick one!) Do you know Lawrence Ferlinghetti’s speech about what poetry is? They made it into a little book you can find here: https://www.amazon.com/What-Poetry-Lawrence-Ferlinghetti/dp/0887393691/ref=sr_1_sc_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1516972688&sr=8-1-spell&keywords=poetry+is+lawerence+ferlinghetti
I use it when I teach poetry and do what you are doing here… ask students to find their own definition. Wonderful way to connect and also conjure some beautiful analogies. Also, Matt de la Pena’s new book LOVE is the same concept. Beautiful! And you know, you can be both gull AND seal. You are. xo
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Hi Irene, I am familiar with the beat poets and Lawrence Ferlinghetti but I haven’t read this book. Ted Hughes also has a book named Poetry Is. I believe I’ll read them both. I like all three of your definitions, and if you don’t object, I’ll add them all. I hope you’ll join us to write a poem from them down the road.
I haven’t read Matt de la Pena’s new book LOVE, but I look forward to it. I read your book with great pleasure, Can I Touch Your Hair? and I was pleased to talk it over with my kids. Thanks to you and Charles for bringing it into the world.
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An invitation … to find ourselves. ❤ How beautiful. ((It reminded me of the Delphi Oracle´s motto: Know thyself!) Sending love, dear Brenda 🙂
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Who better to know than oneself? We are our oldest friends. XOXO
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Love, love, love this!
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Yay, thanks!
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How wonderful. ❤
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Thanks, Gigi!
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What a grand idea Brenda, hosting what poetry is!
Poetry is …truth waiting to be found.
Lovely post–fun poem and image. Glad you had such a moving critique group meeting, I have many take aways from my group too. Thanks for mentioning the Morning Addition poem, I must have missed it this year, I’ll check it out.
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Thanks, Michelle, I’m glad you’re on board. Already lots of good lines have found their way. I look forward to the poetry writing, too.
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poetry is the music of words, our first language.
Thanks for the invitation, Brenda!
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Thanks for participating, Laura. Music, indeed.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WELL, YES…WE (I) CRASH! NOT TOO MUCH COMPETING—MY BLOG FRIENDS AND I ALL HAVE DIFFERENT STYLES AND FOCUS. BUT BE THE BEST WE CAN BE….MOST ASSUREDLY! AM I THE PELICAN—OR A SEAL???? I KNOW WHAT I SOUND LIKE—(ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-!) 🙂
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Definitely a seal! LOL
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a ripple on still water…..
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Nice. 🙂
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How lucky you are to be a part of a writing group IRL! Love the photo and the poem. Great word choice at the beginning–all those hard c sounds really conveyed your meaning and were fun to read.
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I’m glad you liked the poem, thanks! And yes, finding IRL critique groups has really helped my writing. I’ve had some back and forth with agents about mss, a piece accepted by Chicken Soup for the Soul’s Amazing Mom Anthology, and poetry accepted for a few other anthologies. I feel very lucky, but I have so much more I want to do. I thought I would try to give back and offer to connect more people by inviting people to share in a community poem.
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Poetry is the flutter of words at sunrise.
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La poésie est une quête. Poetry is a quest.
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Je l’aime! Do you want me to attribute it to Prunelles9?
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Love it, Jone! I’ll add to today’s post.
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Poetry is … deep thoughts weapped in golden words
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Love it! I’ll add to today’s post.
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