towering salvia stalk,
every tiny purple trumpet
is tenderly touched
Copyright 2017 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: Would I could write my stories as slowly and carefully, with each word tenderly touched and placed just so. And so the whole story-world might grow. Have a magical weekend. We are unexpectedly going to a wedding of sweet, new friends. But I’m still thinking about my writing.
Writing Tip: Here’s a writing tip from the SCBWI Encore Conference I attended last weekend: The best humor is not humiliation. Humor is best when tweaking the power dynamic. In other words, someone who has less power is tweaking the nose of someone with more. So it’s funnier when a kid makes fun of a teacher than when a teacher laughs at a kid. When someone in power laughs at their subordinate, that is humiliation, perhaps even abuse. So if you are the boss, be careful of making fun of your employees. And when trying to write a funny scene, beware of using humiliation.
The proficient guy cable tends to be the uncoiled guy cable, so s/he doesn’t appall anyone. I lovemaking this mail for at least three reasons: Your Bee; Your going to a wedding ceremony; your very judicious advice about humour.
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My wise old grandmother told me that when I am able to laugh at myself, I will be mature.
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Yes. That is a good marker for maturity. Being able to work round your own limitations and even embrace how they make you unique is another.
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I love how creative your words are. I have never been creative in that way and always admire those with that gift.
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Thanks. I admire your homeschooling effort. I need the quiet while my kids are in school to create. Although, I have the rhythm of it now, and I manage even in the summers, when my kids are home full-time.
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Lol, I understand completely that homeschooling is not for everyone. We do love it for our family. Thank you for your kind words.
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My cousin homeschools, and she loves it. Her son is flourishing. Best to you and your family.
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I love this post for at least three reasons: Your Bee; Your going to a wedding; your very wise advice about humour. Well said.
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Thanks, Cynthia. It was a busy weekend. A great one, too. And I’ve been paying more attention to humor and how it’s used in movies/books. The bad guy often uses humiliation. The good guy tends to be the straight guy, so s/he doesn’t offend anyone. It’s fascinating.
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The word “salvia” feels so juicy in this poem, Brenda. Thank you for sharing these ideas about humor and power. Great point.
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Thanks for stopping by, Laura.
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Bee – utiful, Brenda! x 😀 o
(Gown is progressing nicely, but too early to send pic)
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Can’t wait to see it. Have fun with it!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
EXCELLENT ADVICE—OR AS THE BIBLE SAYS…”LOVE YOUR NEIGHBOR AS YOURSELF”. A POETIC STORY MAKES ONE THINK BETWEEN THE LINES, DOESN’T IT? 🙂
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So true. More so than TV.
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Always such an uplifting post. Oh, I was reading several other blog posts, and the one I read before yours was about a lady dating after divorce and all the problems. I commented and said, “Be patient.” Immediately afterwards, I read your post that said, “Bee Patient.” I smiled.
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That is funny. Are you dating? I don’t recall reading about that. You have so many community connections. Other people only have their relationship as their main connection.
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I would like salvia a lot better if it didn’t try to crowd out my other flowers. It is aggressive.
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Is it? Mine seems to barely hang on. I do like the purple spikes, though.
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Excellent! 😎😎😎😎😎
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Thanks!!
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Love the imagery. Agree humor can be sensitive depends on who does it!
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You are right. Humor with love is the best of all.
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Very beautiful dear Brenda
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Thank you!
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Hello sweet Brenda. I love your photo and your writing flow as always. I hope life is going well for you and your kiddos. 😊xo
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We are well, thanks. How are you and BB?
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Happy wedding and so special to make new friends and become immediately included, Brenda.
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It was a beautiful ceremony. It was very sweet of them to invite us.
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i love you approach to slow and thoughtful writing. thinking about each word. you do this so well, it’s clear in your writing. i think you are so right about humor ,too, if we laugh at ourselves and those in a more powerful position than us, it feels right. if we try to make fun of those with less, it just feels cruel. enjoy your wedding –
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Thanks, Beth! I hope it’s fun. XOXO
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