What do you see?
I imagined a baby robin eating his first worm. I looked up baby robins, and I learned they are born with an egg tooth that disappears. They have no feathers, and their eyes are closed until at least three days pass. After three days, the primary feather sheaths begin to poke through the skin. I wonder if that hurts like when a baby teethes.
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: A visual haiku is a photograph that implies the presence of something not there. For other visual haiku, click here, here and here.
References:
Cornell Lab’s American Robin
Messinger Woods Guide to Development of a Baby Bird
Baby Robins in the Nest
That’s such an attractive pretty blue container to be delivered in! 🙂 Interesting that they have an egg tooth – handy escape tool – good job human babies don’t have such things!! And yes, I wonder – do they have feather pains – possible! 🙂
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Oooh, human babies with an egg tooth!! Unkind in the extreme. Bad enough if they are still nursing when the teeth come in.
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Brenda, There sure isn’t anything wrong with your visions. Please take care, Bill
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Thanks! 🙂
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I like what you see!!
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Thanks! Such fun!
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Once a home, outgrown. Now a nest, for a fairy’s rest. ❤
I keep three chickens – one of them is a black Silky, who's name is Mim. (or to give her her full title: The Magnificent, Marvelous, Mad, Madam Mim.) who's eggs are… blue! All my chickens eggs feel like gifts, (and I always say 'thank you' to my girls) but hers feel more like a gift from the chicken equivalent of Tiffany's. 😀 Bless her heart.
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Wow, you are a lucky woman, and I love your rhyme! I also love your Mim, what a great story. I loved Sword in the Stone. 🙂
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I had never heard of a visual haiku before. I love this as a concept and in the photo you shared. 🙂
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Thanks! I thought I was making it up, back when I first had the idea, but I did find the concept already existed. 🙂 So few truly new ideas.
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lovely – such a tender beginning
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Thanks, I love to see the birds. My first ever novel has a bird for the main character. 🙂
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How lovely – are you writing it at present?
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I am rewriting. Again. Sigh. I took it to a writer’s conference I attended in early May, and they gave me lots of good advice. 🙂 The original book I wrote is now 2 books (maybe three). 🙂
In addition, I just finished a new unrelated book in a second series, and I’ve started another new in a third series.
But I’d really like to finish this new draft of the first ever book I wrote.
I’m looking hard for a publisher. Fingers crossed that one of these projects pans out.
Meanwhile, I am in the world of birds again. Thinking like a bird.
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How fascinating – good luck. I’ve been thinking about rewriting my first book too – I published it on Kindle and everyone who commented said it needed a sequel. Funny you should write about your writing experience today. Earlier today I planning my sequel.
Book writing is so demanding – I’m still at the procrastinating stage but the ideas won’t leave me alone.
How interesting you are thinking like a bird – does that mean you think about worms a lot? 🙂
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I think about preening, nesting, roosting, grooming, flying, pecking, growing, flying in rain, beating my wings, heart pounding. Hunting down and eating mosquitoes. 🙂
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lol – 🙂
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So lovely Brenda! 🙂
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Thanks, they are a beautiful bird!
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Beautiful photograph. The blue is phenomenal!
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It’s funny how the rain really makes colors vivid, and a sunny day will wash them out. Thanks!! Brenda
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And why are their eggs such a beautiful blue, I wonder?
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They are vivid, beautiful birds. 🙂
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I see a beautiful beginning and want to believe the baby has grown and moved on and has babies of her or his own now.
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Yeah! Prospering wildly! I like it. 🙂
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Stunning photo, Brenda.
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Thanks!
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In my mind, Life beginning anew 🙂
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I love that! Great thing to see. 🙂
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Nature truly is beautiful 🙂
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Yes, such solace!
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