goodbye jet airplane
carrying Daddy away
come back, come back soon
Copyright 2013 Brenda Davis Harsham
29 thoughts on “Business Trip Haiku”
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It has me humming “I’m Leaving on a Jet Plane…” There is so much in the short amount of words, unsaid emotions here.
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Yes, life is like that though, so much we don’t say to each other. If we think of that as poetry, how sustaining it is. Thanks for noticing the background hum here. 🙂
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I can so relate. As my hubby travels – but at least he’s got a job…in this economy!
And now at least you can use computers to see those far to bring them near…even for just moments. 🙂
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Yes, we do stay in touch, and we are grateful he has steady income. My daughter was so sad to see him go this time though. 🙂
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I think it is different now…While my dad didn’t travel he worked two and sometimes three jobs so we didn’t see him all that much growing up :s
I like the cookie commercial where the parent and child have a snack before saying good night…
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My daughter is used to her daddy being a regular part of her life, he usually reads her a story every day. And he is always available for a hug.
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I think forty and fifty years ago daughters had different relationships with their fathers… especially when they were teens and Dad didn’t know what to do and was more worried about the bills – but we knew he still loved us 🙂
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We aren’t quite there yet. We’ll see. 🙂
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Aw, blessings on his journey, blessings on you and your little ones waiting at home xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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We are all well and happy!! Thanks! Blessings, Brenda
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Yes, come back soon and safe.
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🙂 Boiling it down to the essentials. 🙂
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Love it Brenda! Especially the repetition in the last line…haunting.
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Sometimes repetition can be too much, especially in a short work, so I am glad you like it. My daughter sighed when I read it to her, paused and then smiled with her whole face. She asked me if it was for her, and I said yes, and she seemed well pleased.
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That’s lovely 🙂
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I was NEVER good at writing Haiku…LOL This is nice! 😀
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Thanks! It’s hard to boil down feelings to 17 syllables, for sure! I’m finding the process is helping my writing, though, and I’m enjoying it.
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Thanks, Morgan, you are a delight to me! I’ll come visit soon!
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You are very much welcome, Sista! 🙂
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🙂 Peace and joy to you! Brenda
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BEAUTIFUL EVENING……
blessed…
SINEREL ANDREA:))
**MANY HUGS**
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Andrea,
Hugs and blessings to you, too!
Warmly, Brenda
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**MANY HUGS**love Brenda….
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You can’t be happy, I’m staying with wp
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Haiku is not only for the frivolous. Can cover the important stuff too. 🙂
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I agree entirely. 🙂 Thanks for commenting.
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Awwwwww…..love it!!
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Thanks!
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