pink petals
scent rises like hope
music on the wind
Copyright 2018 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: My haiku are imperfect, but nonetheless I scatter them. Happy Poetry Friday and thanks to Catherine at Reading to the Core for hosting!
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Friendly Fairy Tales 
Lovely simplicity
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Thanks.
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I really like the choice of your words. Do review my poetry on http://www.rhymingart.com
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Thank you.
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Beautiful.
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cool one actually. Thankyou for this beautiful writing.
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Thanks for commenting.
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Nice one 🙂 I also write poetry sometimes. Do have a look whenever you have time. 🙂
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Beautiful…
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Thanks.
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Very poetic. Great work!
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Thank you.
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Hi, I like your Haiku.
I tried to translate it to German, it is also an interpretation.
rosa Blüten
Duft steigt auf wie Hoffnung
Klänge im Wind
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That’s beautiful, thank you.
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This is beautifully written, I would love if you could check out my blog. I hope to be able to write as well as you someday.: https://wordpress.com/view/superlunarysyzygy.wordpress.com
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Such a fragrant poem and image Brenda, I’m picking up it’s glorious scent, thanks!
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Thanks, Michelle. It’s hard to find time for writing now that my kids are home for the summer. But I’m eking out a few posts.
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I sat, exhausted ….this “pink rose” refreshed me with its aroma…..
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Thanks! Glad you felt lifted.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
ALL THAT PREP TIME—WORTH EVERY SCENT, FLOWER AND SEASON! BEAUTIFULLY DONE!
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I love summer.
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By the way, I nominated your blog for the Mystery Blogger Award, but there’s no obligation to participate. Have a great day!
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Thanks, I appreciate being nominated very much. I stopped doing awards when I started writing novels and submitting to agents. It was too time consuming, but I still appreciate the thought and wish you much success.
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Beautiful words of Haiku, Brenda.
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Thanks, Kamal.
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Welcome Brenda
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lovely lovely!
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Thanks!
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Beautiful picture…sweet
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Very passionate verses. Thanks for stopping by.
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I can smell the heavenly scent. 🙂
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Summer’s glory.
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Imperfect? I think they are just dandy! And I can smell this poem as I read it.
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Thanks, Sally. I aspire to write better haiku. Meanwhile, I’m smelling the roses. 😉
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My older granddaughter and I, today, walked through the neighborhood and stopped to smell the roses, “music on the wind”. Perfect, Brenda.
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Thanks, Linda.
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Your haiku is as perfect as the rose in the photo!
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Awww, thank you!
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I love your haiku, especially “scent rises like hope.” I wouldn’t change a word. Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks, Catherine, I appreciate your words.
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I love your haiku just the way it is. Whenever I’m short on time, I will try to squeeze out a haiku, but mine oftentimes feel flat and dull–I’ve got the syllables down, but not the feel quite yet. I think you did a fantastic job!
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Thank you! Wow. I feel like the epiphany part often eludes me.
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All good poetry is imperfect. Really sweet poem! x
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Thank you!
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I think that your poem is perfect just as it is. Your photograph made me so envious – all my roses were destroyed by beetles when we were away this June 😦
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Awww, those darn beetles! And thank you. 🙂
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I think the poem is great. I love how you parallel the scent to music on the wind.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Those roses look like they are sending hope out in every direction! I can smell it from here 🙂
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You can’t be despairing in the presence of such roses. 🙂
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Gasp! That photo is stunning! I love it so much….it took me a while to scroll down to the words which, of course, pair beautifully with the petals singing. Another winner, Brenda.
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Thanks, Linda. Isn’t nature grand?
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Dear Brenda, thank you for scattering your perfect-for-me-this-morning haiku. Lovely! (And I will share with my mom, who adores roses.) xo
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I love that you might share it with your mom. Makes my heart feel gooey. XOXO
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Love all of your scattered poems, including this one. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks, Kim!
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Ah, such Sweetness! 😎😎😎😎😎
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Thanks, Dorna.
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I like music on the wind. It makes me think of fairies hiding behind the folds of the flower petals.
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Another vote for “scent rises like hope!” What a beautiful line! I’m always buoyed by the scent of roses in the air.
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Thanks, Molly. 🙂
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I love ‘scent rises like hope.’
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Thanks, Beth.
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