
Used by Permission of Michelle Kogan
Thanks to Michelle Kogan, a Poetry Friday friend, for this stunning poetry postcard, with strawberries, bees and a Monarch fairy!Her poem:
june berries abound
bees buzz, fairies flutter, and
mother nature nods . . .
I wrote her a poem, in reply, and celebrating Tuesday’s thundershowers:
Like the bees and fairies,
I’m sunshine-happy,
warm-strawberry-happy,
in-a-trance-happy.
Crack-crack-crash!
Dash for the door
as lightning brightens
a darkening day.
Rage divine.
Wet earth. Mint leaves.
Bitter tomato stems.
I soak it up.
Copyright 2017 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: Happy Poetry Friday! Thanks to Diane Mayr at Random Noodling for hosting! Thanks to Tabatha for organizing the summer poetry postcard swap. Such fun to send and receive. Thanks, Michelle!
I’ll be away at a family wedding, but I will try to catch up with everyone on Sunday. Or Monday. Have a magical weekend!
Right now I’m thunder-storm alive and grateful to be inside. But sunshine-happy sounds better. 🙂
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Love ❤️
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Thanks!
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Beautiful postcard features of fairy as a monarch butterfly and her precious words were a treat.
Brenda, your lovely answering poem back was imaginative and describing a storm as “rage divine!” Wow, shivers.
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Thanks, Robin. Melissa’s postcard was stunning.
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I love that our summer swap is the inspiration for new poems.
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Me, too. 🙂
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What a great pairing, Brenda=>Michelle and yours. I would love to capture yours for my summer gallery. I will ask Michelle about hers.
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I’ll see what I can manage. 🙂
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Awesome. 😎😎
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Merci!
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So fun how your poems “talk” to each other!
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Thanks, Mary Lee. Happy Summer!
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A fine pair of poems! I love Michelle’s alliteration and your last three details as part of rage divine!
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Oh, I love your repeated “happy” lines, and those wonderful sensory details at the end. I am soaking it up:>)
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Thanks, Laura. I planted more mint this year. It’s so cheerful, popping up all over.
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OMG! i love your words… i taste sunshine, wet earth, mint leaves and bitter tomato stems.
Delicious!!!
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Summer, yum!
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Crash! – and dash … Perfect pairing of words. Lovely to see the original postcards (gotta love the butterfly winged fairies) and both the poems it inspired. Enjoy the wedding – and the time with family!
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I do love her paintings. I am enjoying the wedding so far. If only we could bring our house with us! 🙂
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Beautiful art and poetry. I love how they come together, and your poetic response provides such a contrast.
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Yes, that was how my day shaped up, full of color and noise. And a soaked shirt as I mulched the last two plants.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOU’RE JUST HUMMING ALONG, AREN’T YOU!
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Yes, indeed! Thanks!
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ONLY SAYING THE TOOTH—I MEAN, TRUTH! 🙂
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LOL
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Simply delicious….from the illustration to the poem to the response. All those smells and sights of summer are exactly what I love! WEll, done!
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I was in my garden when the rain came, and a poem came with it. 🙂
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Love both the original and the reply!
You’ve reminded me of a thought as I picked tomatoes from my mother’s garden…how can such a sweet, smooth red tomato come from such a bitter, rough green stalk?
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Yes, the tomato stem is so bitter and bendy, so apt to break and fall. I suppose it’s best for the plant if the seeds reach the soil early. But I much prefer my tomatoes unchewed by chipmunks. 🙂
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LOVE “sunshine-happy,” “warm-strawberry-happy”! Delightful poetic response and lovely postcard from Michelle. Such a vivid way to describe that rainstorm!
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Thanks, Jama! Poetry begets poetry. 🙂
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I love the card, and especially “Mother Nature nods”, a sweet way to imagine her so pleased with herself. Happy Weekend!
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Thanks for reading, Linda. Michelle captures the spring magic nicely.
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Love your gift from Michelle. I look forward to your photos and her artwork every week…as well as the poetry!
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So glad to hear that. I have a few other posts with garden photos. I have my regular friends to please. 🙂
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“Bitter tomato stems” that one line evokes summer! The tomato plant smell is unmistakable, and unforgettable.
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Yes. The doleful yellow blooms. The tiny green fruit bulging on the bitter stems. My garden is planted, but unfenced. Will I get anything or will the turkeys take it all? Life is a gamble.
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Love Michelle’s poem and painting for you and your response! I’m soaking it up.
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🙂 Plenty of magic to go around.
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oh, what wonderful, magical work from both of you! i love that you found the fairy footprints )
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Thanks, Beth. A touch of magic is just what I needed.
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Aww! This is magical, Brenda. I have a bit of magic in my poem this week, too!
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Yes! I just stopped by and found fairy footprints, and I tweeted about it. Great poem! It spoke to my inner child.
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Such pretty imagery in both the artwork and the poems. I like the way you have described the drama of the rain storm.
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Thanks, Suzanne. There’s magic in storms.
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Beautiful and sweet.
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Isn’t Michelle adorable?
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This is so nice, Brenda. The card and verse and your poem.
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Thanks. The postcard swap is fun.
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Thanks for posting my summer postcard swap to you Brenda! Here’s a link to the Postcard in my Etsy Shop: https://www.etsy.com/listing/523816092/berries-bees-fairies-postcard-by?ref=shop_home_feat_2
Love the encroaching storm you’ve described in your poem, and the twist in this line is powerful,
“as lightning brightens
a darkening day.”
Hope you get to soak up some more sunshine too!
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Thanks for stopping by Michelle and leaving the link. Your postcard is lovely.
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Pretty poem and artwork. I love the postcard idea!
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Thanks, it is fun.
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Reblogged this on PoetSpeak and commented:
A gorgeous picture and cute words.
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Thank you. Michelle is a great artist.
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