Ferocious Women
who never bring you coffee
dream in poetry
warm art in their core
climb like smoke from a fire
leave a wild song
stir alive
wizards and wolves
in a rush of green and gold and gray
weather awful times
shake-awake the world to good
wear their stories with a smile
eat masks, drip truth,
radical truth,
(I do not exaggerate)
find joy in life
moments to intertwine
connect, concentrate
make a ferocious dinner
drink the wind in exaltation
save softness for dessert
Ferocious Women
storm in words that endure,
fearless
Copyright 2017 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: This poem was written in homage to the January 21, 2017 Women’s March, which took place in 600 cities and was an historic outpouring of world-wide support for women’s justice and rights. I wrote a poem about the march called America the Beautiful. I also wrote this poem, inspired by and utilizing the following lines, collected by Donna Smith, contributed by the following Poetry Friday regulars (including me):
- Buffy S: “ferocious women who never bring you coffee” – refrigerator magnetic poetry
- Donna S (instigator extraordinaire): “always leave a wild song” – refrigerator magnetic poetry
- Linda B: “dreaming women do art in poetry” – from her pile of poetry blocks
- Buffy S: “where wizards and wolves rush by in a blur of green and gold and gray” – patched together from Kate Dicamillo’s Where Are You Going Baby Lincoln
- Kay: “ignore the awful times, and concentrate on the good ones” from Vonnegut’s Slaughterhouse Five
- Linda M: “waking the world to a new day“
- Margaret S: “steam that climbs like smoke from a fire“
- Carol V: “fearless women reach out, connect, and find joy in life’s intertwined moments” – Connecting to the word “fearless” that April had used last week.
- Tabatha Y: “little chest to put the Alive in” – Emily Dickinson
- Joy: “wear loose clothing and a smile” – from a thought and some connections
- Jan GA: “I feel like there should be more stories out there for girls, and I try to tell them” – a quote from Hope Larson from the book COMICS CONFIDENTIAL.
- Mary Lee H: “ferocious women do not exaggerate” – from Mary Oliver’s UPSTREAM on page 109, “I do not exaggerate.”
- Brenda H: “make a ferocious dinner that eats masks, drips truth and saves softness for dessert“
- Keri L: “radical at their core” from her husband’s magazine, “Guns & Ammo”
- Kiesha S: “ferocious women would rather drink the wind” – a line from Mary Oliver’s (Why I Wake Early) titled “The Arrowhead”
- Diane M: “Out of endurance, exaltation” – a line from the poem “Monadnock” by Robert Francis.
Thanks to Carol Varsalona at Beyond LiteracyLink for hosting Poetry Friday this week! I look forward to reading more poetry, some of it Ferocious, at the link up. Have a magical weekend!
If you want to take up Donna’s Poetpourri Challenge to make a poem from those lines, you can check out these links: it starts here and has guidelines here. The bloghop linkup is at Mainly Write.
A ferociously strong poem too. Loved it!
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ferocious women dream in poetry
ferocious women storm in words that endure.
I love that! So well expressed.
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Thank you!
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Hi, Brenda, as I wrote on Christy’s reblog, I find your poem very strong. It has sharp and well defined imagery. Could it be considered a cut-up poem? As I understood, it contains lines from other works, rearranged and adapted for your text and aim. Have I got that right?
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Great question. I agree with you. This could be considered a cut-up poem in several ways.
The project’s original inspiration (not mine) started with magnetic poetry, which is a tactile thing that probably was inspired by cut-up poetry. When I read about the project to make a line about Ferocious Women, I contributed a line that I wrote on the spot. Once we had contributed lines, we then took those (some of which were already cut-ups or from magnetic poems) and further rearranged them. Except that I did it in a modern way, with no scissors involved. I seem to remember that some of the other participating poets actually printed the lines, cut and rearranged them. 🙂
Thanks for asking such an interesting question. And for your kindness about my poem.
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I don’t know how I missed this, but thankfully Christy reblogged, and now it’s found. It’s wonderful! ❤
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Thanks, Resa. Christy is a dear to reblog. So many have stopped by. What a great connector she is.
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This is lovely poem packs a powerful message. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Christy also directed me here – I smiled when I saw the link. I love how you put this together!
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Thanks, Louise! I was feeling fierce. 🙂
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