fading afternoon
vacation memories stored
moss darkens the day
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
22 thoughts on “Ending Vacation Haiku”
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Brenda, And a lifetime of memories crammed into a week. Take care, Bill
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Yes, I will have to make some scrapbooks to help the kids to remember, because we may not get back to Florida anytime soon. And it was beautiful! Hugs, Brenda
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The darkness evokes a sadness. I can see how Beth interpreted this! Smiles, Robin
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Robin, Even the most beautiful day fades into night. 🙂 It is bittersweet, I agree. 🙂 Hugs, Brenda
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Great poem (I hope that’s what it is 😳 ) and the pic is good.
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LOL A haiku lament… LOL What could it be but poetry. It’s not suited for anything else.
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I’m not really sure what a haiku is. I can’t even say it, dadblameit!
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High-coo! Poetry should not be a source of frustration! 🙂
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Thank you, Brenda. Only I would mess that up!
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Go ahead, make a mess.
finger paint /
mud pies and puddle splashes /
poetry in laughter
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Haha! Nice one.
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Time flys when you’re having fun. .. Hope you had a fun and relaxing trip!
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Very, feel much less stressed. 🙂
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Oh no, over so soon!
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I know, surely the week was only one long, glorious day.
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Delightfully sad.
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A little green and droopy. 🙂 Describes our morning perfectly, bart bag in hand. LOL
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it sounds like you had a wonderful time, filled with adventure. it’s always a little bittersweet at the end )
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We’re so happy to be home!! Woo-hoo!!!
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Lovely haiku! I’ve never actually seen Spanish moss in real life…
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Sounds like a wonderful vacay!
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It has been, and it’s a has-been, mostly done now. 😉 Coming home soon. 🙂 Winter pictures to come… LOL
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