Sunset sledders,
free and unfettered,
plummet downhill,
as Saturn and Jupiter align.
Whizz-bump-thumps,
bouncing-shrieks, and
wild laughs echo
as mist blurs the treeline.
Copyright 2020 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: My friend, Leela, posted this photo of the evening she and her family sledded and witnessed the alignment of Saturn and Jupiter just after sunset (Monday, December 21). I was all set to write a poem as if the photograph were sunrise, wanting a beginning to parallel the new year soon beginning, but Leela reminded me that sunset is a blank slate. We all deserve a blank slate, as we let 2020 melt away. Thank you, Leela. Happy Holidays, everyone.
Writing Tip: A good poem reflects your life. In my case, I used memories of sledding trips with my kids to imagine an experience Leela’s family had. Focusing on the poem, the act of fitting memories and imagination into two structured quatrains was meditative for me. In these stressful days, finding a way to be meditative can be the difference between a good day and a bad one. May you find ways to release your stress that work for you.
This looks pure magical!
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Thanks. Leela got a great picture.
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Glad to see Santa stuck the landing. 🙂
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I especially appreciated your thought that our words/poems reflect out lives, experiences and memories. It is a reminder to create beautiful memories that will continue to sustain us as we move forward in our timeline. All the very best of this special season to you and yours.
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Very important to respect and remember the beautiful things because doom-scrolling and quarantine threaten to swamp us. We have to hold tight to the good. Trim sail and stay to our course, despite howling winds and driving rain. Happy Holidays. I look forward to your podcast Season 2 Episode 50 with Klausbernd. I’m saving the tab to watch tomorrow. xoxo
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So very well said, Brenda! I know that you will enjoy Klausbernd. And there is more coming….he and Hanne are truly an inspiration to me. Hugs!!!
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Saving it as a treat. Always important to remember color. Hugs to you, too.
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Beautiful work, Brenda❣️
Happy Holidays to you and yours 🎄
Best wishes for a healthy New Year!
The Fab Four of Cley 🤶🏻🧚🏻♀️🎄🧚🏻♀️🎅🏻
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I’m glad you stopped by. Now I can easily find you and catch up! 🙂 Happy Holidays and wa-hoo the wicked year is dead!
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Absolutely beautiful poetry and soul stirring.
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Thanks! Very kind of you to say.
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Happy holiday. Have a GREAT New Year. Lovely poem.
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Thanks, Gigi. I’ve been enjoying your chickens in pjs. 🙂
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Thanks for wrapping us in your conjunction of Jupiter and Saturn., and sharing this evocative image Brenda.
I‘ve been looking for the two traveling planetary partners but haven’t seen them on my own yet, it’s been very cloudy ⛅️ in Chicago. I have a draft of a poem in progress… Lovely post!
Hope your teeth are okay I know many woes with my own, sending hugs 🤗 and healing thoughts.
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My friend Leela was in the perfect place because most of New England was under the cloud cover, as was I. Sending healing thoughts your way, and I hope your woes are soon well. I miss Poetry Friday. I’m glad to still see my Poetry Friday friends. xoxo
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Fabulous blog
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Thanks! I appreciate the visit.
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this is a beautiful post about beginnings and memories, love it, brenda
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Thanks, Beth. It was better than posting about the dentist, which is where I’d been. 🙂
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thank you for this choice )
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Wish I’d been able to see the “star”!
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I’d been to the dentist (so many times recently), and was in no shape to be sledding and sky gazing, but I envy Leela that she managed it.
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Beautifully evoked memories
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Thanks, Derrick. Did you sled as a child? I remember the rush. Such fun.
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We never really had enough snow 🙂
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We had mountains of snow when I was a kid. I remember it being above my head, tunneling through the backyard. Digging out snow caves for hide-and-seek. Such fun memories.
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I’ll bet
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Love to you Brenda and Happy, Healthy Holidays to you and yours.
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Thanks, Cindy. Happy, Happy Holidays!
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