The
leaves
whirl, swirl,
frisk and flutter,
before settling into
honey and russet blankets,
beech, maple, birch, oak, cherry.
From spring to fall, each paper-thin
leaf gives its fragile life to the tree, thankful,
for
each
day.
Copyright 2020 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: Concrete poems have words that form a relevant shape. I tried for a leaf-shape, but the poem wanted to be a tree. Amazing how long these take to write. I’m thankful for this glorious fall, when the world seems new again, and 2020 shows promise of change. I’m thankful for family, staying close and separate from others. Happy Thanksgiving to all Americans and Happy Fall to everyone else!
This was beautiful. Well done
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Thanks for your comment and for stopping by. I love your butterfly photo!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
IT JUST WANTED TO BE A TREE! VERY NICE EVERGREEN, AS IT TURNED OUT!
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THANK YOU FOR BEING A FRIEND! I AM VERY THANKFUL FOR YOUR POETRY AND PICTURES…AND THE OCCASIONAL OBSERVATION ON WEATHER! 🙂
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I’m thankful for your friendship as well. I hope you and your wife are dong well.
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PEDALLING AS WE CAN!!!! 😀
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Beautifully done – and hope you had a pleasant Thanksgiving Day.
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Thanks, we did. And I hope you did, too.
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Beautiful photograph nicely celebrated in apt concrete poem
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Thanks! It was finicky work. 🙂
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Happy Thanksgiving.
Loved the shape of the verse.
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Thank you!
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Happy Thanksgiving. The triangle of change to usher in the new and refresh petals adorning our lives.
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A lovely, poetic comment. Thanks.
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Hope all is well. Have a safe and healthy holiday season.
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Thanks! Likewise.
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I’m thankful for your moving 🍁 🌲 poem that’s swept me away with it’s beauty! I especially love the “honey and russet blankets, “ and each paper-thin
leaf gives its fragile life to the tree,” Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family Brenda! xo
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Thanks, Michelle. I thought I would focus this year on the thanks and the giving of Thanksgiving. Usually I only focus on thanks. I feel sad that the native Americans who were part of that first Thanksgiving are getting a hard time from the government, though.
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trees know where they want to grow, just like your beautiful poetry tree grew. happy thanksgiving to you and yours, brenda –
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A great perspective. 🙂 Likewise!
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