June Song
–by Irene Latham
Let me be sun
kissing horizon each morning
warming lake
to bathwater.
Let me be heron
wading grassy shallows
taking only as much
as I need.
Let me be lily pad
spreading glossy blanket
sheltering young and hungry
across swaying hours.
Let me be mudfish
burrowing in darkness
finding beauty
in cool, lonesome sludge.
Let me be cottonmouth
swimming with head high
always leaving behind
fat ribbons of light.
Notes: Thanks to Irene Latham, powerhouse poet for this wonderful poem, the birdcage magnet, the notebook and a note with kind appreciation for my blog. I’m honored she wrote this poem for me, using my poem as a seed for her thoughts.
Thanks to Tabatha Yeatts for organizing the 2018 Summer Poem Swap. Thanks to Karen Edmisten for hosting the Poetry Friday round up this week.
I’ve had an eye infection for a couple of weeks. Not able to use the computer much. Typing is difficult, and reading is worse. I hope to be reading as much as normal soon. Have a magical week!
lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you.
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Such a beautiful poem and a lovely idea.
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Thanks so much, Carol.
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Very lovely
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Thanks!
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This is a poem I enjoyed reading. Thank you Irene and Brenda.
Thank you Brenda for inviting me into your world of poetry.
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A pleasure to meet you.
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Irene’s poem fits you very well — you leave ribbons of light with your friendship and poetry! I hope your eyes feel better soon. If you have calendula, you might be interested in this: https://thenerdyfarmwife.com/calendula-a-natural-remedy-for-irritated-eyes/ Also, some folks use chamomile tea bags.
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I’m afraid my eye problem is beyond what calendula can do for me, although I love that post and appreciate your wanting to help me. I’ve seen a series of specialists. I’ve been on antibiotics, creams and compresses, but nothing makes it go away. This week, they plan to irrigate my tear duct. Eek. They aren’t sure what it is, whether it’s deep inside or only on the surface. My vision is bad, though, because the goo I have to put on one eye makes it hard to see with both. I keep thinking I’ll wake up and it will be healed, but no. The worst part is how tired I am. And that the computer makes my eye burn and ache. But I will get through this. I just hope I don’t need surgery. Thanks for your kind words on my blog.
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Wow, that sounds rough, Brenda. Does changing the lighting on the computer help at all? I hope they are able to figure out what helps you soon. Thinking of you!
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Thanks! That reminds me. More eye gunk. Sigh.
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Wow, such a lovely gift from Irene! I’m so sorry to hear about your eyes, and hope you will be all better soon. Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Thanks, Ruth.
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Beautiful poem from Irene! Hope your eye is feeling and seeing much better soon.
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Thanks! I hope so, too. I had so many things I wanted to do…
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That definitely reads like an Irene poem! Beautiful.
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She does have a sure and elegant voice.
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Hope you are healed quickly. I love this poem. She captures each scene so eloquently.
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She does so much with so few words.
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What a pretty package of poetry! And, I love how Irene has taken seeds from your poems to create something new. I cannot think of a more perfect pairing than your word images and Irene’s setting them into lines and stanzas. I have to say, I am identifying with the mudfish these days. I’ve set up a writing space in the cool basement and I am happy in the shallows. Happy summer writing.
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How perfect a basement is for summer writing. You’ll be able to drink tea, too!
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Truly gorgeous poem that especially speaks to you Brenda–and so fun to hear the echoes of your first line in Irene’s poem. Lovely package, enjoy! Hope your eye is on the mend and that you are feeling better very soon!
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Thanks, Michelle. I hope my eye is better soon, too. And I get my energy back. I’m dragging lately.
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Sending more healing thoughts your way–Hurry up get better eye, Brenda needs to read and write, xo
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LOL Yes! XOXO
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The Poem Swap is a joy, and your gifts from Irene, extra beautiful, Brenda. Touching each other personally is a lovely idea that Tabatha started.
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It is, and I am still in the planning stages on my end. The eye infection is making it hard to send, but I will get to it. Meanwhile, I’m having fun with the planning.
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What a gorgeous poem!! It belongs in a book :).
Sorry to hear about the eye infection. Sucks when reading is difficult. Feel better soon!
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Irene’s poem is gorgeous. I like her goals very much.
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Always a delightful way to start the day. Feel better soon!
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Thanks!
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Thank you for always being an inspiration, Brenda… so many of your words stick with me! Just this morning I was remembering your polkadotted princess and thinking that so needs to be a book! Hope you’re all better soon. xo
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I do hope my newest book sees the light of the library one day. I plan to start a new revision soon.
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transcendental motive-centered imagery…much appreciated.
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Irene gives great inspiration. Thanks.
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THE EYES HAVE IT…PLEASE TAKE GOOD CARE OF THAT ONE—WE MISS YOUR WORKS FULL OF WONDER! 🙂
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Thanks, Jonathan. I’m hoping to be better soon. I hope you and your wife are doing well.
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STILL PEDALLING–OR PADDLING, WHEN THE RAIN GETS HEAVY!
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We could use a little rain here. But no floods!
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Wait a few days, and…!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
I JUST LOVE THIS ONE! MINIMAL WORDS GIVING MAXIMUM EXPRESSION! GREAT WORK—BRENDA–TAKE GOOD CARE OF YOURSELF!
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Irene is a wonderful poet, thanks, Jonathan.
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SHE SURE IS! 🙂
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Hope you are better soon.
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Thanks!
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Wonderful poem
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Irene is very talented.
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