Bound by the shared weight of winter,
the empty bird feeder and I
let down our neighbors, as our emptiness
lets in the cold, the sleet and the
wet indifference of early snowfall.
Where is our divinity, our seed,
our stored warmth and harvest?
In the waiting armchair, beside
the banging, hissing radiator,
the words of Mary Oliver remind me
to find that place in myself
that remembers water lilies, golden light,
herons rising, the beating wings of swans,
while my tea cools and my cookie vanishes.
Copyright 2016 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes: Here, Mary Oliver reminds me:
“In the pinewoods is where the owl floats, and where the white egret paces, in summer, like a winged snake, in the flashing shallows. Here is where two deer approached me one morning, in an unforgettable sweetness, their faces like light brown flowers, their eyes kindred and full of curiosity. The mouth of one of them, and its vibrant tongue, touched my hand” (p. 96). The “door to the woods is the door to the temple” (p. 98).
— From Oliver’s Winter Hours: Prose, Prose Poems and Poems (Houghton Mifflin Company, copyright 1999)
Happy Poetry Friday and nearly Happy New Year! A nor’easter is stomping through like a careless giant, downing tree limbs and sparking lightning, but I am snug and dry in my favorite armchair, sipping Winter Hours like cognac. Thanks to Donna Smith at Mainely Write who is hosting this last Poetry Party of the year.
A magical New Year to everyone!
Brenda, your poem rivals any of Mary Oliver’s. It’s lovely and timely for me to read it during dreary January. Yes, there’s beauty to be found here in the gray of this day.
Blessings ~ Wendy
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Thanks, Wendy. What a fabulous compliment. Blessings to you, too!
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I love this beautiful poem by Brenda and Mary Oliver’s words—such a wonderful homage to nature. Thank God for that place inside ourselves that is joyful, hopeful and strong.
It brings to mind one of my favourite Albert Camus quotes, “In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer. And that makes me happy. For it says that no matter how hard the world pushes against me, within me, there’s something stronger – something better, pushing right back.”
― Albert Camus
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That is a wonderful quote, Susan. I know just how Camus feels. I have that invincible summer in me, too. Thanks for reblogging. Have a great MLK day.
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Somehow I missed this when you published it! Marvelous!
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Thanks!
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Lovely poem!
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Thanks! Sir Chocolate looks like fun.
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Beautiful poem, Miss Brenda. The cold emptiness of winter. Happy New Year,
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Thanks, Toni. Happy New Year to you and yours, too. May 2017 bring you lots of love and joy.
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I enjoyed the poem a lot. A very perfect nature poem. A beautiful topic for poetry. Keep this teriffic work going. All the best… I too have a website: https://incrediblepoetry.wordpress.com. please visit and comment about what you think of my poems. I would be very thankful to you. And ya, keep writing such beautiful poems
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Always a pleasure to read more poetry. Glad you liked the post. Take care, Brenda
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Fabulous post and Happy New Year 2017 Brenda ….Ian ⭐️😊
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Thanks, Ian! HNY to you and yours, too!
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Beautiful post by Brenda Davis Harsham
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Happy New Year, Brenda! That first stanza is just exquisite, and not only because it captures a little of the empty helplessness I feel as I look out at the world right now. Thanks for bringing me your (and Mary’s) encouragement.
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Hi Heidi, I’m so glad you could relate to how I was feeling, listening to the howling Nor-Easter.
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It’s hard not to feel emptied out after the past two months. Turning to poetry, to Mary Oliver is exactly right. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem and these wise words: The “door to the woods is the door to the temple” (p. 98). Happy New Year, Brenda!
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We had a rough year. But we’ve also had beauty, growth and meaning, too. Thanks for reading and understanding. Happy New Year!
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Your response is worthy of Mary Oliver’s inspiration, Brenda! Wishing you a new year where you find those places in yourself.
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Happy New Year and thanks, Buffy!
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I enjoyed your double worlds of armchair, hissing radiator, tea and disappearing cookie, while you get captured by Mary Oliver’s delight in nature. I’m sure the birds will forgive you for leaving their feeder unattended.
Happy New Year to you and your family, Brenda!
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Thanks, Violet! There is always more than one world in my head. I wonder if that’s the definition of insanity. 😉
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Happy Nee Year sweet Brenda! 💕💕I wanted to say thank you for being such a wonderful friend and inspiration to me. I hope you and your family have a beautiful new year. 💕❤XOXO
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Whoops I forgot to say I love your photo and your poem inspired by Mary Oliver. It’s beautiful! 💕💕
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Thanks, MM! You are a treasure. I love your art, your inspiring words, and your faith in love. XOXO
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Awe thank you sweet Brenda I do have faith in love. You are a treasure too a treasured friend. XOXO
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Yay! XOXO
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I wish you and BB a Happy New Year, too! I hope you have a good health year. No more surgery and no more new illnesses! We need a break! 🙂
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Amen sister! We sure do. I think this year will be a good one. I wish and hope the same for you! Big hugs and love to you! ❤
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XOXO
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Lovely response to Mary Oliver, Brenda. I love this, “The ‘door to the woods is the door to the temple'” That’s one of those lines that begs to be tacked up over my desk.
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Isn’t Mary Oliver amazing? She makes me sad that I gave up my poetry for so many years. I feel like she gives tongue to thoughts I’ve had and let gather dust.
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Hi Brenda, thank you for sharing this and for following my blog. Your writing is delectable and evocative. I shall look forward to seeing more of it. Regards, Liv
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Hi Liv, Thanks for stopping by. Happy New Year!
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Thanks for drawing me into your cozy corner for a few moments and the lovely summer images inspired by Mary Oliver. Wonderful poem, Happy New Year Brenda!
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Thanks, Michelle!
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Beautiful! I often find winter a difficult time, I get laid low by the gloom and the cold and the grey, but there is a beauty even in the harshness of winter, if only we know where to look!
Happy New Year!!
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Many of us find winter a difficult time. You are not alone. Books always help me. Happy New Year to you, too!
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Brenda, may your bird feeder remind us that we need to honker down and fill our containers with life. The snowfall does look rather peaceful. BTW, I love the postcard you sent me. Thank you so much.
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I’m so glad you like the postcard. 🙂 Happy New Year!
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Excuse me if I don’t place your postcard on PF. I laid it down somewhere and in the midst of the holidays it has not surfaced yet.
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No worries. It was a gift not a responsibility. 😀
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Mary Oliver reminds us all to notice things, the ordinary, miraculous things. Like your empty bird feeder symbolizing the cold winter, that emptiness we need to fill.
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Yes, her words are a good guide.
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Wow! Nothing like having Mary Oliver give you that little poetic push, is there?
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I thought I wasn’t able to write anything this week, and SHAZAM! Mary Oliver to the rescue!
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This is gorgeous!
And my favorite thought from it is “find that place in myself
that remembers…”
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Thanks! If only we could live in that place, like the lotus eaters, happy and easy with the world. But life seems more about the prosaic details some days. 🙂
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Oh, my goodness the words take my breath away. The shared weight of winter. Beautiful. Beautiful. I have the book on my wish list and haven’t allowed myself to purchase until I get through a few on my TBR pile. I’d best get cracking. I feel that I need Oliver’s words if this is what they do to a poet.
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There is also a poet call to arms on page 24, entitled the Swan, and it made me want to hug the book. There a much better description of it here: http://old.post-gazette.com/books/reviews/19990620review274.asp
I’m adding it to my present list, too. 🙂
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Excellent!
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Thanks, Dorna!
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I love the shared weight of winter ! Mary Oliver is great at reminding us to be present in our own lives, and to be grateful for the beauty that is all around us. Happy new Year! xo
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Thanks, Irene!
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Brenda, this is one of my favorites of yours. Your photo is gorgeous and I love the beginning line: “Bound by the shared weight of winter”. The mood of that first stanza is so beautifully crafted. Then, TA DA!!!! Mary Oliver to the rescue! Someone should send that woman a superhero cape! Wishing you a wonderful 2017 and minimal mid-winter doldrums!
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Thanks, Molly. I do love MAry Oliver. I got three books of hers out of the library as a mid-winter gift to myself. Oddly, in Winter Hours, she doesn’t really talk about winter very much. 🙂 Clever of her!
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beautiful – i love mary’s words and i love yours
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Thanks, Beth.
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Beautiful. I love Mary Oliver too.
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She rocks.
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Every good wish for the New Year, Brenda. You are in good company with Mary Oliver. 🙂
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She is a force for good in the world.
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She certainly is. And you, too. 🙂
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Aw, thank you!
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Lovely!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you!
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Same to you, Brenda
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Thanks, Derrick!
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Lovely poem Brenda. Blwyddyn Newydd Dda to you and I hope it’s a good one.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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Likewise, my friend. Blessed 2017 to you and yours.
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Your poem captures that particular mid winter angst beautifully. It is so strange to read it here on a summer evening. It’s funny how you forget just how intense winter can get yet when in the grips of it there seems to be nothing else.
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For us, the doldrums are in February usually, but this year, they are starting early for me. Perhaps that’s why I read your post as sad. Hard to imagine summer right now, with white outside my window.
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Brrr – snow is pretty but so very, very cold. I hope your house is nice and warm.
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No frostbite yet! 🙂
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That’s good. 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you!
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A GOOD GIRL, THAT MARY OLIVER! BRENDA TOO! 🙂
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