spun sugar trees
limbs bent to the knees,
white with delight
Copyright 2016 Brenda Davis Harsham
Notes:
This is a rhyming haiku.
It’s something to do.
Want to try one, too?
Happy Valentine’s Day and welcome to Poetry Friday, this week hosted thanks to Kimberley Moran at Written Reflections.
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WINTER SOFTNESS!!!!
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SPUN IN SOFT WHITE YARN!
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😀
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Knots of growth
Tangled thoughts reach for light
Buried in shadows
Love your pic.
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ideas sprout in shadow,
red, green, brown, yellow
mushroom in spring
Thanks for joining in, Claudia. I like your words! 🙂
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beautiful, and happy valentine’s day to you )
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Thanks, Beth!
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Ooooh… spun sugar trees! LOVE it, Brenda! The rhyming adds an element of comfort, I think… soothing to the ears and the soul.
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Thanks, Michelle. It came out rhyming and refused to change. Then I realized it’s a thing. Other people do rhyming haiku, too. I was charmed. 🙂
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Not only haiku, but rhyming??? Holy cow! Quite a challenge. I love these words and image.
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Thanks, Carol! I was trying to have fun. It’s all one can do in the doldrums of February. 🙂
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There is something especially simply balanced, comforting and satisfying in the words, juxtaposed as they are with the image that evokes mystery and myriads of intriguing possibilities–complex. It’s a good tale you’ve spun! What could be more apropos that spun sugar on the day for love? Happy Valentine’s Day!
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Thanks and Happy Valentine’s Day to you, too.
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Perfect match of poem and image!
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Thank you!
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Yummy and sweet little diddy. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Gorgeous!
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Thanks!
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Sugar Spun…pure Brilliance 🙂 (not to mention Beautiful!)
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Thanks, Morgan. Don’t they look good enough to eat? 😉
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Your poems make me so happy. Spun sugar!! Yay!
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Yeah! I’m happy to make others happy, can’t imagine a nicer treat than your comment. Thanks, Jama.
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You have a gift, my friend.
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Thanks, Hook. What a nice thing to say!
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And how beautiful it is too 🙂
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Thanks, Andy!
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🙂
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