Round purple hedgehogs
Rise above a bed of green thistle;
Bees circle them like moons,
Dodging spines that bristle.
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Note: This flower is Globe Thistle (Echinops ritro). The bees were too quick for me, none lingered to become famous on my blog. 🙂
You capture such beauties.
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Thanks! 🙂 Nature is so beautiful, it’s easy!
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Bees are so unreliable! Super poem – I love things that rhyme.
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It was amazingly hard! I could not get the rhythm right for the longest time, despite knowing what I wanted to rhyme and knowing what I wanted to say! 🙂
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Like you said in one of the other comments – the fewer the words the harder it gets – especially when you’re trying to rhyme – and the only word that rhymes alters the whole feeling of the poem. Getting just four lines that you are actually happy with can take forever!
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I know, but it’s worth the effort. 🙂 And you just know when it’s finally right. 🙂 I stopped by. You’re getting an ebook all ready?
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It’s a long story – and it seems to be taking forever! – I started all this last November.
I happened to mention to a few people that I was finding out how to make ebooks – with a view to selling my short stories – and how complicated it was.
The next thing I knew, I had two full length (Self Help type) books full of images, tables and lists (all are difficult in ebooks) waiting to be converted.
I’ve nearly finished the second of these (some corrections to go back to the author on Monday) then I can tie up the lose ends and, I hope, get back to my own stories!
Normally, a publisher won’t print a single short story – it just costs too much to manufacture a book with only a few pages – but ebooks don’t have that problem.
It should be quite cost effective selling a single short story ebook for 50 pence (or 70 cents) – designed for people to buy and read on their phones/tablets.
There’s much more – but I won’t fill up your comments with it – if you send me an email – ford.davidj AT gmail.com – I’ll send you a sample to test for me as soon as I can get one finished – and more details of ‘The Master Plan for Overnight Fame with Instantaneous and Unbelievable Wealth’ (In Big Red Letters). Yes, send me an email – you can play too, if you like.
David
PS an important part of the current plan is, unless it costs nothing to join, I won’t be taking part myself.
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Goodness, I’m not sure I followed all that. I sent you an email. Hope the Master Plan goes flawlessly!! LOL Warmly, Brenda
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It’s easy really – that’s just me trying to make it sound complicated – I’ll email tomorrow – I must go to bed now – it’s half past midnight here.
Keep an eye out for an email from me and open it on your phone if you can. I need to know how easy it is to get the ebook to where you can read it on a phone – as I see that as the main market. Thanks for your help.
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I don’t bounce my email to my phone, but I get kindle books on my phone.
What fun!
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Organic pompoms 🙂
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🙂 Just so. 🙂
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aaaawwww ❤ somewhere a speck of dandelion dust that had lost its way thanks you for these beautiful words
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What a lovely thing to say! 🙂 Have a great weekend! Warmly, Brenda
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🙂 you too brenda, much warmth!
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We need it, temperatures are dropping. 🙂
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Love the pic … and a lot of action with your words. Well done!
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Thanks! 🙂
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I have a special-event blog party this weekend … so hope you can stop by for the festivities.
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I’ll try, but this weekend, I have two soccer games on Saturday, and company coming for dinner. Sunday I have two soccer practices and a sprinkling of playdates throughout. I’m not sure if I will be able to take my blogging medicine. I’m sure to go into withdrawal at some point. 🙂
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Oh my … you are busy, just so you know my timing, post goes live 12:15 AM Saturday (Eastern).
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Gotcha. I’ll be happy to drop by if I can find blogging time. 🙂
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love this, brenda. i have a proud bunch of scottish thistles in my yard and they grow bigger and rounder each year, just like hedgehogs.
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I love Scots thistle. It’s like a craggy cliff. I wouldn’t want to sleep there, but it has a stark majesty. 🙂
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I love the comparison to hedgehogs:) So sweet.
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Yeah! That came from fingertip magic. I thought I was going to write about galaxies, and there was hedgehog. 🙂 I guess my subconscious knows a couple things. 🙂
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I love that you saw the tiny wonder in these. Beautiful shot.
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They were like a little galaxy, but my poem went in another direction entirely, which surprised me. 🙂 Have a great weekend!
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Beautiful:)
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Thanks!!
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Oh, Brenda! So adorable and how did your imagination come up with this one? Such a perfectly sounding, fun poem!
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Robin, The shorter, the harder, in my experience. This one was in drafts a long time. Thanks for commenting! Hugs, Brenda
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🙂
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They look like fairy caps to wear in winter! 🙂
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Aren’t they very different? It took me a long time to figure out what they are. I’m watching your earth angel video now. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 Yes, they are quite different! That is how I feel many times….quite different, and sometimes that is a good feeling, sometimes not, but that angel video reminded me that I am a good kind of different 🙂
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I’ve often felt like an alien from mars. I’ve always had my own reasons for doing things, different from other people. 🙂
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I know excatly what you mean!! Only I feel like an alien from Heaven 🙂 🙂 ❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂 I always believed that a loving family would be a certain way, not the way I felt growing up. More embraced, accepted and heard. And now I am trying to raise my kids that way. 🙂
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Your kids are so blessed to have a lovely and loving and magical mother like you!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 ❤
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Thank you! I’m not perfect, but I think my heart is in the right place, as we say. 🙂
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I just know it is in the right place, and I dont think anyone is perfect! 🙂 Unless it is perfect to be imperfect, which it might just be! 🙂 🙂
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LOL Then we are all perfect. Or imperfect, like two side of a spinning coin. 🙂
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Yes 🙂
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