found in a forest
longing for large, long-tongued bees
tranquil trillium
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Note: This haiku is Alliterative, which means that its words start with the same letter.
Reference: https://gobotany.newenglandwild.org/species/trillium/grandiflorum/
37 thoughts on “White Wakerobin: Alliterative Haiku”
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I love the idea of the long tongued bees!! 😀 That’s a really lovely flower – very pretty!
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Butterflies have really long tongues, too. LOL Thanks!
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Thanks for showing me this Alternative haiku form. I might just try it tomorrow. My short verse site is turning out to be an intro to short forms month 😉
I like those large blossoms with three petals! Your verse is nice too 🙂
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Thank you…
http://julesgemstonepages.wordpress.com/2014/05/16/sky-sigh/
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So lovely, both your words and photo!
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Thanks!!
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These are gorgeous! Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks!!
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Very nice Brenda. I had not ever heard of this Haiku before. Love it!
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I may have made it up. I didn’t check, for once. 🙂
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ooh, i love the trillium. and the words of course )
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Thanks! It was down a secret path in the woods. 🙂
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This is beautiful! Love your photo! 💗💗
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Thanks!
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It’s an interest bees have tongues, I’d say.
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I don’t want to think about it too carefully!! LOL I’d like to keep my distance and admire from a far. LOL
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Haha. Me too. I hate stingers, you know.
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I hate stingers jabbed into my flesh, I don’t mind them on others. 🙂
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extremely clever!
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Thanks! 🙂 I was feeling playful.
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🙂
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Oh so wonderful Brenda! Both the Haiku and the sweet flower photo! .-) I needed some sweetness today 🙂 Big hugs to you my Fairy Friend! 🙂
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You deserve sweetness. And big hugs! 😀 Brenda
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Brenda, I do appreciate the pictures, more than I care to admit. I miss that aspect of living in the north. But as much as I miss it, I would not return north to live. Florida is much more to my liking. But thank you so very much for the constant reminders. Take care, Bill
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Bill, You are welcome to look and not long for life up here. I love to look at other places, too, but I love my home, and would not want to leave it, despite the cold winters and long, rainy days. Today was another glorious day. And we don’t have killer bees! 🙂 Cheers, Brenda
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Harmonious haiku. 🙂
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LOL Thanks!
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Wonderful.
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Thanks!!
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your blog is really beautiful. your floral pictures are lovely. xo
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Thanks!! I have fun! 🙂
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Good morning, Brenda. Simply perfect, both image and words. Well done, friend!!! Love, Amy
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Thanks, my friend! Much love, Brenda
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Much Love to you as well, Brenda. xx Amy
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Well crafted Haiku, Brenda 🙂
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Thanks!
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