Hyacinth:
Flowers bow to morning,
Embracing hope for a warm spring,
Ready to rise up and have some fun in the sun,
Celebrating the warming spring days,
Dancing with new tulips:
Reverent.
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Note: The triquain is a 7-line poem with syllables increasing then decreasing by threes: 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, and 3. Longer versions and complicated repeating content are also common flavors, but I chose to keep it simple for my first try. This was inspired by the Paint Your World with Words Weekly Poetry Prompt, Triquain.
Mesmerizing and beautiful! I like how you are writing these nature poems and making us feel spring. I feel delighted to read your poems every week, so motivating and refreshing in their own way. ❤ it!
Thank you for your participation!
Regards
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Happy to be managing to participate, despite crazy busy weeks. April has not been an easy month for me, but I have high hopes for May! 🙂 Thanks for running a prompt, it’s been fun learning new forms. Cheers, Brenda
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I am glad you participate, it feels nice to see poets write for the prompts. I hope you have a relaxed May for sure! Thanks for the motivation 🙂
Regards,
Amreen
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Wow I don’t think I would be brave enough to try this poetry style! If normal haikus give me a headache imagine what this would do to me. . . LOL enjoyed and admire this post, your hyacinths look wonderful! 😀 x
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Ease your way there. You might find you have a subject with too much to say to fit it into three thoughts. I like the various forms for different things. And sometimes I like free verse and sometimes rhyme. I’ve always had too many hobbies. LOL Thanks for your lovely words. Cheers, Brenda
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I will start slowly and work my way up. . . there’s so many forms of poetry to try, so little time! Any time Brenda 🙂 x
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I sure agree about the too little time. 🙂
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OK…. I added some additional verse while playing ‘stuff the prompts’ including sandwiching a Triquain! Enjoy:
http://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2014/04/24/multi-prompt-twisted-reflection/
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Yes, I quite like it!! I like combining prompts, too. I should be writing a haibun, but I can’t even seem to get through my comments… Deep sigh.
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Writing comes first. Comments second. I still owe return visits… but I’ve gotta write first.
I think folks who write…understand that. 🙂 I hope.
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Yes, good strategy!
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Brenda, I really don’t remember these being in our yard when we lived up north, I don’t know how my wife coud have missed such beautiful flowers, she had everything else in her gardens. Take care, Bill
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The scent is strong. Perhaps she didn’t like the way they smell. For me, narcissus is way too strong. I don’t plant that. Narcissus is also called Paperwhites.
You enjoying your bachelor week? You take care, too! Warmly, Brenda
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Feast for the spirit. Lovely!! 😀
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Thanks! I love the spring flowers. Such a relief after the long winter. 🙂
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Another new short form… Yum.
You are a treasure!
I brought in some bouquets of hyacinth – their sent overpowering and intoxicating!
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Mmm, they do have a way of spreading spring throughout the house. 🙂 Going to join in the prompt?
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I might… after April is over. But I might just borrow the form for now 😉
I’m almost doing three pieces a day as it is. 🙂 And that’s cutting in on my sleep time (giggle).
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Wow, 3 pieces a day!! It’s a rare day I manage that many. What a powerhouse you are!! I’m trying to write a novel on the side, as well as care for my three kids, and some days I think my eyes will pop out!! LOL
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Beautiful hyacinths, Brenda. Love your poem, and I’ve made a note of the form. Don’t think I’ve tried writing this form before.
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It was a fun form, but interestingly, I didn’t write it in order. Instead, quite out of order. It was a fun but chaotic process… 🙂 Let me know how it goes for you.
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Will do! Thanks.
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Lovely celebration of the hyacinth, tulip and spring.
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Thanks! I need to come for a visit. I haven’t seen you in my reader. 🙂
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Well, you certainly found me. You paid such a long visit. Very much appreciated. Sorry I couldn’t find any fairies for you. I think they all live over at your place. 😉
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LOL Fairies don’t like to be found. I’ll share my stories and poems with you any time. Seems like the journey you are on is a deep, thoughtful one. I’m glad to learn more about NZ. I would like to set a story there one day.
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A gentle poem accompanied by lovely photos. I hope your wish for a warm spring comes true.
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Thanks! Seems doubtful at the moment, but who knows. 🙂 Has the heat eased in your neck of the woods?
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Yes – summer was a very hot five minutes – it feels like a dream now as we seem to be heading into a very early and cold winter. Climate change sure is unpredictable. I love the flower photos you are currently taking. I rarely see those flowers these days – I used to have them when I lived in the mountains but that was many years ago. Re – online publishing – I tried it last year and found it a lot of work for very little reward. Your stuff seems to have more commercial appeal tho.
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Oh, I don’t know if I have commercial appeal. I was surprised when I started getting so many followers. I’m still surprised, and a bit overwhelmed.
A friend in publishing (at Harlequin) said publishers won’t publish anything already up on a blog unless the numbers climb into the hundreds of thousands or millions. I couldn’t handle that much traffic and blog the same way. I’m already drowning in comments, much as I love them. I’m always behind in reading. I guess eventually I will have to do what OM (do you know him?) does and not take time to read what others are writing. He’s got over thirty thousand followers, but even that isn’t in the ballpark for a publisher, from what I’ve heard. I don’t really want to do that, though. It’s a dilemma I never expected to face, honestly. I don’t know the answers to it, but trying to find time to self-publish would be difficult.
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For the self publishing – you could just start collecting what you have already written together in one Word Document. Once you have enough simply go to Kindle and follow their instructions to upload your manuscript into a book format. It’s free but takes quite a few hours to get organised. I’m not sure how you include images though there is that option on Kindle. To create hard copies you have to apply for an ISBN (the international serial number that you see on all published books), Once you have that, people can order a hard copy and Kindle prints it out. I looked at other publishers like Lulu and one called something like Smashwords but I found the Kindle site easiest to understand. It does take a while to get familiar with the process – a self published author helped me through and I could do the same for you but I am no expert..
Food for thought anyway. The trick is in the marketing. With so many followers I think you stand a very chance of getting lots people buying and reading your books.
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Some people have recommended createspace, but I think a photo book would be too expensive. I guess if I did it on kindle, then I should be able to use photos. Intriguing!! What a generous offer!! I will give it thought after my writer’s conference next week. 🙂 Hugs, Brenda
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Lovely flowers and nice photos!!
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Thanks!! Spring is a beautiful time!
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Lovely flowers, lovely poetry! 😄yay
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Thanks!! I’m enjoying having my kids home. 🙂
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Such a happy-joyful poem!! 🙂 I love it, and also the flowers! This post makes me smile! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I’m so happy that you are smiling, angels should always smile. Many joyous days to you, Brenda
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Gorgeous 🙂 I could almost smell it 😉
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Thanks, Hyacinth are rather strong. 🙂
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wonderfully so 🙂
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Yes, much more fragrant than leaf mold and brown grass, which they perfume in turn. 🙂
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I’m poetry illiterate but it was nice:)
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Juan, I’m always happy to see you stop by. I’ll come by and see your new digs again soon. 🙂 Warmly, Brenda
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No need to bring a bottle of wine as a blog warming gift:) dinner will be at 8:)
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LOL I came, ate too much, drank in the news and now the ZZZs are coming! 🙂
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what a wonderful colour! Lovely words
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Thanks!! I hope you’re having a magical week! 🙂 Warmly, Brenda
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Beautiful. I love the imagery, and the playfulness. This form seemed perfect for the poem. I am truly impressed 🙂
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I didn’t have the same kind of success, but I participated nonetheless 🙂
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Aw shucks. 🙂 Thanks!! 🙂
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Very pretty! And so fragment. Hugs, Barbara
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Barbara, Do you mean fragrant? 🙂 Thanks! Hugs, Brenda
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Thank you for all the positive energy you give to the world. Hugs, Barbara
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Thanks, my friend!! And to you as well!! Hugs, Brenda
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