My young daughter’s first ballet class,
Awash in swirly pink,
Young girls,
Hair tidied in a looking glass,
Stopping for a quick drink,
spins, twirls.
Fingers together in ballet,
with correct attitude,
Balance.
Raising her arms in grand plié
A graceful interlude,
Warm glance.
My heart was sore to see her there
Leaving me to learn dance,
Wide grin
In place, twinkling eyes full of cheer,
And with a graceful stance,
leap, spin.
Copyright 2014 Brenda Davis Harsham
Inspired by the Paint the World with Words poetry prompt, which was to write a Memento, a style with 6-line stanzas, composed of patterned counts of 8/6/4/8/6/4 syllables and with a/b/c/a/b/c rhyming.
What a lovely poem! 🙂
It reminded me of my own ballet classes 🙂
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Seeing my daughter with her arms making an oval above her head and her toe tapping to one side in the pink leather shoe, it really made my heart ache. She was a sunflower in her recital. Such precious memories. I bet you were adorable, too!
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Aww how sweet…:)
Thank you! 🙂
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How beautiful Brenda!! ❤ And such a lovely memory to keep (poem and picture). Blogs are very useful diaries of our lives, much better than those closed ones in a book that you only get to see yourself – share the moment with the world!! 😀 I wish I had picture of me in my ballet gear when I was very little, or my classes at age eleven – I was ballet mad for quite a few years, and then I decided to be an actress. I'm glad I didn't do either, my personality wouldn't have suited either career. Nice to dream of though! 🙂
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Suzy, It is a lovely dream. People who studied ballet tend to be very driven, successful people, in my experience. 🙂 Cheers, Brenda
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I adored this black and white treasure of a photograph! It is a jewel, a gem or a precious moment in time. Love the fact you took it, too. I have memories of my girl’s ballet practices but no photos. I have one of my oldest daughter in her tutu, but it is rather formal. This was a sweet cotton candy of a post, Brenda!
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Come to think of it, it is a bit like a circus getting her in her shoes and skirt and into class. I can’t think of cotton candy without thinking of the circus. Remember seeing them make in that giant twirly machine? Now they just sell it in plastic bags. So sad.
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Aw Brenda this is gorgeous! Both the poem and photo capture a moment to treasure. 🙂 I can still remember my first ballet class like it was yesterday! x
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I bet you could leap with the best of them. 🙂
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Ah I like to think so! 😉 x
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I enjoyed your poem, and the picture is beautiful, too. My oldest daughter began ballet but didn’t last long with it. She was too young, I think.
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I don’t know if my daughter will last or not. She wants to continue next year. I may let her. 🙂
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I think my daughter was only four at the time. I think she lasted three days. lol
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Wow, three days. We are well beyond that, but I don’t believe her genetics will take her very far. I’m 5’9″ and her father’s taller than me.
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I hope she stays with it. That would be nice. You didn’t say where she is in the picture. Are the students about six years old?
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The student are 3 to 5. The 3 and 4 year olds have a tougher time of it, they often cry when their mothers leave. My daughter was 4 when she started, but an old 4, if that makes sense, She was rarely clingy.
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What a beautifully written and touching story. The photo is so lovely. The innocence and creative energy of all those little girls is something to behold.
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Thanks, I had never written a memento before, but I found myself remembering my daughter in her class. I was surprised at my own mixed feelings. The girls are so excited to be there, in a temple to girlhood. It really is quite a vibrant place.
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What a lovely image – a temple of girlhood. I might have quote you there. 🙂
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The poor dads look like giants, head and shoulders above and pink and purple sea. They have pinched looks too, like proximity or being severely outnumbered makes them uneasy. I started talking to one’s daughter, and the dad gratefully came over, sat down and chatted away the five minutes before class.
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OH! such joy, a little girl
Especially in pink as they spin and twirl.
Ballet shoes and ponytails
Tears to the eyes? It never fails.
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What a lovely poem, Willow! Thank you!! And yes, many a tear on my side, and gleaming smiles on hers.
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as is quite right too!
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Aw! Beautiful words for a beautiful princess! You are one very luck y lady honey, I hope you are all smiling now the sunshine is coming back to us 🙂 My own daughter is more of a’ Merida’ – she soon decided she’d rather be wielding a sword than a tutu! Oh well, horses for courses… Massive blessings to you and your little angels 🙂 x
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My daughter loves Merida, but is not inclined toward warfare, more toward having a rack of pretty dresses, with gloves and purses and friends to dress up with. She’s lovely, but very different than her tomboy mom. Does your daughter actually wield a sword?! Wow!!
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lol, yes with two brothers who fancy themselves as knights she has little choice! (And daddy has a big sword and mail so she’s quite immersed!) she still goes in for the princess dresses at the same time though, which cuts quite a terrifying look! 🙂 Blessings to you and your little princess 🙂
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How very Merida indeed. A fierce princess of the celts. 🙂
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oh, what little beauties they are, if you could just hold onto these times forever. i love this picture and your words are perfect. it’s so bittersweet to watch as they grow and learn to spin on their own, not needing us to keep them from falling. )
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Yes, I didn’t realize why I was reluctant to put her in a dance class until I did, and then my heart ached. She mounted a humorous campaign to try to get lessons, so eventually I gave in. And she sure loves it.
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Really precious, Brenda…
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Thanks, Ese!
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Lovely photo and perfect expression of a mother’s pride.
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Thanks, my friend. I am a proud mom. 🙂
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Aww, that’s so sweet!!! 🙂
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Thanks! Such a feminine world. The dads all look a bit lost there. 🙂
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How adorable they all are! 🙂 Little ballerinas 🙂 I have a story about a ballerina! Hihi! 🙂 Your poem is just super cute Brenda, like your daughter 🙂
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Line, Thanks! Is your ballerina story up? Link? Warmly, Brenda
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Awesome!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very sweet! I love it when my girls are in dance class. 🙂
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Thanks, yes, they are precious memories. Worth holding close. 🙂 Thanks for commenting! Warmly, Brenda
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I agree! 🙂 You’re welcome.
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This is precious. I can still remember my first ballet class. I was 3 1/2 yrs old. Black Danskin long sleeve leotard, pink Danskin tights and black Capezio leather ballet shoes. Our teacher wanted us to wear black shoes until we were aware of how to pointe our feet correctly. I can still see the studio and hear my teacher’s voice and remember the stick she carried – tapping it to keep time with the piano.
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The studio my daughter is in color codes the classes, and my daughter is in the pink class — shoes, leotard, and tights. Next year, she will be in the lavender class. My daughter really likes it. The girls are so adorable!! Thanks for commenting! Warmly, Brenda
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I love this Brenda! The picture is perfect and your words describe that feeling so well. I’m a former ballerina and taught a class of 4-10 year olds. I’ve watched my daughter take her first class and it was a precious moment. This was such a lovely gift to read.
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It was a lovely, bittersweet moment for me. It’s a world I don’t know very well, but it looks beautiful from the outside. 🙂
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The inside is just as beautiful. Ballet is the body’s poetry 🙂
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Yes, I can see that. I always wanted to learn. I’m pleased for my daughter to be included in that world. You must have worked hard to become a ballerina. It’s not easy, from what I can see.
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You should be published! ( Or maybe you are already.) Word Press is an outlet that publishes your talent. So it’s all good! 🙂
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Stacey, Awww! Thank you!! This is a form of publishing I like, but I yearn to be traditionally published and make money, as many do, no doubt. Someday, I would love to see my book in a bookstore. 🙂 Cheers, Brenda
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That would be so cool to go to a booktore and see your
creations!
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Indeed! It’s a dream. 🙂
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Oh, Brenda, how precious!! My eyes welled up!!! xxoo
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Amy, Thanks, what a lovely, touching comment. Hugs, Brenda
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I LOVE ballet and I LOVE children, Brenda. That picture is a keeper, and man, if that was my daughter, I would be showing her off too!!! You have an Angel!!! Love, Amy
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I do have a beautiful angel, thank you, but I tried to make her not too recognizable. She is so cute in releve with her hands up high. Still I feel a bit sad, she is growing up so fast. I remember her at two, splashing in the tub and laughing.
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Brenda, enjoy every moment you can. Time goes so swiftly. Now I will have to go peek at that picture again. I thought I knew which girl. Now I will make sure. 🙂
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Awwwwww……I was right. Just darling. I wish I could reach in and bundle her in my arms, smell deeply that little girl smell and hug her. Lucky lucky you!!! xx
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Amy, It is a joy, thank you, I do feel lucky. She sleeps in a bed with about a hundred stuffed animals, and people just keep buying her more. They are all her favorite. Warmly, Brenda
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(tears) People like you give rise to HOPE in this world. Perhaps this world does yet have a chance of turning around. (((HUGS))) Amy
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Amy, I always have hope. Even in the darkest of times, I knew I could outwait them, and life would turn around, and it did. I hope you get the things you want and need, too. Giant hugs, Brenda
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Brenda,to be honest, the last three years have been rough. Lately, I feel the “light” again, a freshness, a lightness, a JOY that disappeared through many trials and dark periods. I never lost hope, though, and I persevered. Now that I am so immersed in my photography and beautiful people like you, my life is smiling again. Sending you Much Love today!!! Love, Amy
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Amy, I think a lot of people come to blogging from pain, from a place of restricted freedom, or from longing for a new direction. I am in a lot of pain daily from a back problem, but I am healing, moving in the right direction and focused on joy. I try not to dwell on it, rather I try to avoid it. It requires some hard choices, less driving, less sitting, more moving, more exercise. But these are all good things. And my daughter is a shining light in my world. As are my beautiful blogging friends. Hugs, Brenda
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Brenda, I too am dealing with back issues. I have for more then 20 years. I just now am moaning, heading for the bottle of pain medication that I have to take. But, even with the pain, I am seeing a very slow improvement over the years. And yes, my photography is my outlet to help me forget this pain AND the joy that it gives me actully decreases the pain. Bless you!!! I KNOW! Love, Amy
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Amy, You are indeed a kindred spirit. I hope your back feels better soon. Mine has been a problem off and on since I was in a colossal car crash at age 4. I try to manage it without the drugs, but some days I don’t make it. And occupying my mind is key. 🙂 I hope your progress toward wellness is swifter than you think. Hugs, Brenda
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Bless you, Brenda!! I had a severe back injury in 1993 and after 2 surgeries, was not walking for almost 2 years. I am a product of mind over matter and inch by inch brought this body back to strength and health. There is not a day that goes by that I take pain medication. And I sometimes feel such gratitude for those pills, because without them, I would be in agony. And would not wish to live.
Every day gets a little better. I just met a woman yesterday who is encouraging me to seriously get back into body building. You know what, Brenda, I just might do it! LOL Love, Amy
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Amy, My spine surgeon said sit ups, every day, was the secret to not re-injuring. I hope he’s right. I’m going to do some now! Cheers, Brenda
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Brenda, it is true. Strong abs is the key. Yet, even with situps do them carefully. Bend your knees and come up doing crunches without pulling on your neck. Coming all the way up puts a big strain on your back. Crunches are the way to go. Walking too, as well as working out on machines to increase strength. Flexibility is another key… so Yoga is really good. Every body is different, so everyone’s “keys” will differ. I know what mine are. Good luck!!! FORM is all time important to not injuring yourself. xxoo, Amy
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All true, and I agree. Wellness a day at a time. Blessings, brenda
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